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Good afternoon teacher and everyone, my name is thinh and I’m 14. At the moment I’m studying at Thanh My Tay secondary school and I'm in class 9a2. Today I am here to present to you about [topic] like and dislike. Firstly, I will talk about my passion is Drawing when I was in elementary school and I usually draw with emotions, not with any subject. Because that's where I can unleash my creativity with the things I come up with. Secondly, When I paint, I realize that my favorite color is green. because it carries a symbol of growth, harmony, lushness and fertility. In addition, it also gives a sense of security when painting. However, what I don't like about painting is the fill and border, because when I make a small mistake it affects my whole picture. Finally, drawing is my passion. that's soon
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I am here to present to you about [topic] like and dislike.
Firstly
, I will talk about my passion is Drawing when I was in elementary school and I
usually
draw with emotions, not with any subject.
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Because
that's where I can unleash my creativity with the things I
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come
up with.
Secondly
, When I paint, I realize that my favorite color is green.
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because
it carries a symbol of growth, harmony, lushness and fertility.
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, it
also
gives a sense of security when painting.
However
, what I don't like about painting is the fill and border,
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when I
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make
a
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small
mistake it affects my whole picture.
Finally
, drawing is my passion.
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soon
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IELTS essay like and dislike from you

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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