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Life Relationship with people online

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I have a really nice friends that i meet online when i was 9 they were the kind of person i can get close to. I never have much common in the other kids i was just into something else that they would ever been, sometimes i wish i could meet by best friends/bestie in real life but i dont have the condition to meet them. Because that my mother doesn't trust people from the internet, so i never told them cause im scared that i will loose them. As the friendship goes on our group of friends starts to fall apart for reasons but apperently when life goes on we meet new people and it goes over and over again until we understand or learn from it, curently im having a great time with my relationships with all those people i meet. And i wish i can hope this relationship stays forever
I have a
really
nice friends that
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i
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meet
online when
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i
was 9 they were the kind of person
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i
can
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get
close to. I never have much common in the other kids
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i
was
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just
into something else that they would ever been,
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sometimes
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i
wish
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i
could
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meet
by best friends/bestie in real life
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but
i
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dont
have the condition to
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meet
them.
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Because
that my mother doesn't trust
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people
from the internet,
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so
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i
never
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told
them cause
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im
scared that
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i
will
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loose
them. As the friendship goes on our group of friends
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starts
to fall apart for reasons
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but
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apperently
when life goes on we
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meet
new
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people
and it goes over and over again until we understand or learn from it,
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curently
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im
having a great time with my relationships with all those
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people
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i
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meet
. And
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i
wish
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i
can hope this relationship stays
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forever
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IELTS essay Life Relationship with people online

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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