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The given plans illustrate the structure of a first floor a unspecified museum, during 20 year period, from 1990 to 2010. Overall, the ground floor underwent a slightly development throughout reconstruction and relocation. Amongst the changes, one of the most significant advances was the replacement of archaeology gallery turned into the children’s interactive zone and the poster. First, it can be seen that there used to be only the gift shop in 1990, on the contrary they expanded the shop by adding a café shop. In addition, a lift was constructed between the gift shop and the natural history room, Another notably shift is that the rearrangement of the reception counter. From being in front of the museum office, it now separated apart from the office and relocated to a position where it is closer the entrance. Besides, the entrance was also increased in size which is twice as big as the previous one and moved to the middle of the museum.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 plans illustrate the structure of a first
 floor Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 unspecified museum, during It seems that a hyphen is missing.20-year
20 year
 period, from 1990 to 2010.

Overall
, the This word is British English. Did you mean "first floor"?first floor
ground floor
 underwent a You used an adverb ('slightly') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('development') instead of another adjective.
slightly development
 throughout reconstruction and relocation. Amongst the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
, one of the most significant advances was the replacement of archaeology gallery turned into the children’s interactive zone and the poster.

First
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 the gift You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 in 1990, on the contrary
 they expanded the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 by adding a café You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
. In addition
, a lift was constructed
 between the gift You use this word too often, consider replacing it withemporiumdepartment storechainboutiquemarketoutlet
shop
 and the natural history room,

Another notably
 shift is that the rearrangement of the reception counter. From being in front of the museum office, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 separated apart from the office and relocated to a position where it is closer the entrance. Besides
, the entrance was also
 increased in size which is twice as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 as the previous one and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the middle of the museum. 