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Life is big cities is becoming worse .Problem and solutions essay.

Nowadays, life is becoming mostly worse in industrial areas. I will discuss some problems and solutions in upcoming paragraphs. Discussing the first point, the most intrinsic one is that traffic. To justify, undoubtedly, in these days, not only I but also majority of people migrated from urban areas. Moving further, due to fact that multitudes do not give preference to public transports instead of private automobiles. Being a number of motors which are available on the roads then traffic is increased. Owing to that fact, vehicles emit obnoxious gases. For instance, carbondioxide, monodioxide as well as nitrogen and so on. which causes various health ailments with out any doubt, such as asthma, liver cancer and cardiovascular diseases.

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 problems and solutions in upcoming paragraphs.

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 point, the most intrinsic one is that traffic. To justify, undoubtedly
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people
 migrated from urban areas. Moving further
, due to fact that multitudes do not give preference to public transports instead
 of private automobiles. Being a number of motors which are available on the roads then traffic is increased
. Owing to that fact, vehicles emit obnoxious gases. For instance
, Possible spelling mistake found.carbon dioxide
carbondioxide
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monodioxide
as well
 as nitrogen and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on. which causes various health ailments This word is usually written together. Did you mean "without"?without
with out
 any doubt, such as asthma, liver cancer and cardiovascular diseases. 