Levels of young crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions v.4
Levels of young crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions v. 4
In the recent years, almost countries around the world have the higher rate of young crime. There are some reasons causing this situation and some solutions should be implemented to prevent it.
The rate of young crime has increased because of some reasons. Firstly, teenagers lack education from parents and schools. Many parents only want to earn much money and they believe that money will bring happiness for their children, so they become to ignore ones. They are so busy and have not enough time to share and talk to children, therefore the children might become worse. Beside parents, teachers are also important for children. They need to discern behaviour and attitude of children and give useful advice. Secondly, teenagers are impacted by games and social networks dramatically. They learn many things from Internet but they cannot distinguish between good and bad things. Therefore, they can be cheated and exploited to become a crime.
There are some solutions which can prevent this situation. Government should raise parents’awareness about educating their children. They need to spend more time to take care of and educate the children. Apart from parents, teachers also need to warn teenagers of harmfulness of social networks and teach them how use the Internet efficiently. Moreover, government should have policies to manage websites and social networks in a close way to protect children.
In conclusion, while there are some reasons leading to commit crime in young people. measures need to be taken to tackle this problem.
In the recent years, almost countries around the world have the higher rate of young crime. There are
some
reasons causing this situation and
some
solutions should
be implemented
to
prevent
it.
The rate of young crime has increased
because
of
some
reasons.
Firstly
,
teenagers
lack education from
parents
and schools.
Many
parents
only
want to earn much
money and
they believe that money will bring happiness for their
children
,
so
they become to
ignore
ones. They are
so
busy and have not
enough
time to share and talk to
children
,
therefore
the
children
might become worse. Beside
parents
, teachers are
also
important
for
children
. They
need
to discern
behaviour
and attitude of
children
and give useful advice.
Secondly
,
teenagers
are impacted
by games and social networks
dramatically
. They learn
many
things from Internet
but
they cannot distinguish between
good
and
bad
things.
Therefore
, they can
be cheated
and exploited to become a crime.
There are
some
solutions which can
prevent
this situation.
Government
should raise parents’awareness about educating their
children
. They
need
to spend more time to take care of and educate the
children
. Apart from
parents
, teachers
also
need
to warn
teenagers
of harmfulness of social networks and teach them how
use
the Internet
efficiently
.
Moreover
,
government
should have policies to manage websites and social networks
in a close way
to protect children.
In conclusion
, while there are
some
reasons leading to commit crime in young
people
.
measures
need
to
be taken
to tackle this problem.
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