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Level of crimes between younger generation

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The level of crimes against younger offenders has been increased dramatically, because of economical recession in many countries. Most of the countries worldwide have been yet recovered from the economical crisis that happened in 2008. And many people have lost their jobs. To be forwarded with the global pandemic of covid -19. This crisIs of the Coronavirus, has increased the level of deployment situation globally and as a result, the level of crimes has been increased too even to provide the basic level of living which is food. As an example of that, crimes against delivery agents for fast-food restaurants in the USA. Many companies has dismissed their employees and locked down their companies, due to lack of income resulting from the latest pandemic. Therefore, many countries faced an increment in the level standards of living such as cost of food and accommodation which younger offenders cannot live easily with, even if they are working. Economical enrichment in some countries has proofed less criminal level and one of these countries is Qatar which was ranked on one of the top ten safest countries to live at.
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countries
worldwide have been
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economical
crisis that happened in 2008. And
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many
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people
have lost their jobs. To
be forwarded
with the global pandemic of
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covid
-19. This
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of the Coronavirus, has increased the
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level
of deployment situation globally and
as a result
, the
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level
of crimes has
been increased
too even to provide the basic
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level
of living which is food. As an example of that, crimes against delivery agents for
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fast
-food restaurants in the USA.

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companies
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has
dismissed their employees and locked down their
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companies
, due to lack of income resulting from the latest pandemic.
Therefore
,
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many
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countries
faced an increment in the
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level
standards of living such as cost of food and accommodation which younger offenders cannot
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live
easily
with, even if they are working.

Economical enrichment in
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some
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countries
has proofed less criminal
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level
and one of these
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countries
is Qatar which
was ranked
on one of the top ten safest
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IELTS essay Level of crimes between younger generation

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
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