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The world’s wealthiest countries have increasingly been outsourcing labour- related jobs to cheaper alternatives in other nations. Write an essay supporting the case for the outsourcing of labour.

The world’s wealthiest countries have increasingly been outsourcing labour- related jobs to cheaper alternatives in other nations. Write an essay supporting the case for the outsourcing of labour. jdqjX
The use of technology is increasing rapidly in the modern world. Growing technological influence can even be seen in the classroom. Despite this, I disagree that technology will completely replace human teachers in the foreseeable future. Analysing the inability of a technology-driven teacher to both cater to student learning needs and instil motivation will show this. Firstly, a teacher powered by artificial intelligence would have difficulty interpreting the educational needs of a classroom of students. For example, Honda Asimov, one of the world’s most advanced robots, has trouble distinguishing simple human emotions. If today’s most advanced artificial intelligence cannot categorise these basic physical cues, it is difficult to believe that a robot could be capable of altering study plans and teaching styles in a dynamic classroom setting. Thus, this makes it clear that a technology-driven teacher is not going to be operational anytime in the near future. Secondly, a robotic teacher would not be able to establish the emotional connection needed to motivate students. The American scientific theory of education plays a good example here. This widely supported theory argues that young learners are most motivated when they share an emotional relationship with their instructor. As most would agree expecting children to form emotional ties to machinery is unrealistic, the argument that technology will replace the teacher in the classroom can be debunked.
The
use
of technology is increasing
rapidly
in the modern world. Growing technological

influence can even be
seen
in the classroom. Despite this, I disagree that technology

will completely replace human
teachers
in the foreseeable future.
Analysing


the inability of a technology-driven
teacher
to both cater to student learning needs

and
instil
motivation will
show
this.

Firstly
, a
teacher
powered by artificial intelligence would have difficulty interpreting

the educational needs of a classroom of students.
For example
, Honda Asimov,

one of the world’s most advanced robots, has trouble distinguishing simple human

emotions. If
today
’s most advanced artificial intelligence cannot
categorise
these

basic physical cues, it is difficult to believe that a robot could be capable of altering

study plans and teaching styles in a dynamic classroom setting.
Thus
, this
makes
it

clear
that a technology-driven
teacher
is not going to be operational anytime in the

near future.

Secondly
, a robotic
teacher
would not be able to establish the emotional connection

needed to motivate students. The American scientific theory of education plays

a
good
example here. This
widely
supported theory argues that young learners are

most motivated when they share an emotional relationship with their instructor. As

most would
agree
expecting children to form emotional ties to machinery is unrealistic,

the argument that technology will replace the
teacher
in the classroom can
be debunked
.
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IELTS essay The world’s wealthiest countries have increasingly been outsourcing labour- related jobs to cheaper alternatives in other nations. Write an essay supporting the case for the outsourcing of labour.

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