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I was born and bred in Ho Chi Minh city, especially I have been residing near the heart of the city. Ho Chi Minh city has universally known as a sprawling city, which has developed industrialization. In addition, it has many places of interest which have attracted a lot of tourists. As well as it consisted of many popular high-rise flats, fashionable boutiques, and many enormous shopping centers. The citizens have had a hectic pace of life. They have always been swept along by the rat race. Because the living expenses in Ho Chi Minh city have cost an arm and a leg. Nevertheless, I'm fairly aware of the damage problem of the city's environment. Because of the crowded individuals, it has caused the traffic congestion frequently at rush hour. Due to that, a huge amount of exhausts and fumes have emitted from the vehicles. Even though the government has been promulgating a few legislations. Personally, I have realized that it hasn't worked.

I was born
 and bred in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Ho Chi Minh City
Ho Chi Minh city
, especially
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Ho Chi Minh city
 has universally
 known as a sprawling city, which has developed industrialization. In addition
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many
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a lot of
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many
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many
 enormous shopping centers. The citizens have had a hectic pace of life. They have always been swept
 along by the rat race. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 the living expenses in If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Ho Chi Minh City
Ho Chi Minh city
 have cost an arm and a leg. Nevertheless
, I'm fairly
 aware of the damage problem of the city's environment. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of the crowded individuals, it has caused the traffic congestion frequently
 at rush hour. Due to that, a huge amount of exhausts and fumes have emitted from the vehicles. “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Even though
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 has been promulgating a few Possible spelling mistake found.legislation
legislations
. Personally
, I have realized that it hasn't worked. 