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letter to the restaurant that you enjoyed 1. describe your visit 2. reason 3. what did u like the most v.1

letter to the restaurant that you enjoyed 1. describe your visit 2. reason 3. what did u like the most v. 1
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to convey my regards for the meal that I enjoyed with my family recently at your restaurant to celebrate my promotion at work. I and my family had visited your restaurant last Saturday (dated: Aug 31 2019). We were just browsing through the internet for some good Indian Cuisines available near to my place and I found this new place. At first, I was not really willing to visit anything new as I always wanted to go for the one that had already been. But upon reading the reviews from other customers and my wife insisting the same we took a chance. And I have to say, it was really a worth and you guys made our day! My 1 year in the workplace paid off. All the hard work put in really helped me and I got my most anticipated promotion. I was waiting for this day from last 3 weeks and I was looking forward to celebrate my happiness with my family and children. Your restaurant served the best and it was an icing on the cake. Firstly, I appreciate the all the food that was served to us, especially the authentic style Biriyani which my wife loved the most. The customer service was top notch which needs a special appreciation. The ambience was just fantastic with the best Indian classical music being played in the background. This is one of the best restaurants I had food in the recent times. I would definitely pay a visit again soon and would also recommend my friends the same. Thank you, Sandesh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to convey my regards for the meal that I enjoyed with my family recently at your
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restaurant
to celebrate my promotion at work.

I and my family had visited your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
restaurant
last Saturday (dated: Aug 31 2019). We were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
browsing through the internet for
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some
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good
Indian Cuisines available near to my place and I found this new place. At
first
, I was not
really
willing to visit anything new as I always wanted to go for the one that had already been.
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But
upon reading the reviews from other customers and my wife insisting the same we took a chance. And I
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have to
say, it was
really
a worth and you guys made our day!

My 1 year in the workplace paid off. All the
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hard
work put in
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me and I
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got
my most anticipated promotion. I was waiting for this day from last 3
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weeks and
I was looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to celebrating".
to celebrate
my happiness with my family and children. Your
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restaurant
served the best and it was an icing on the cake.

Firstly
, I appreciate the all the food that
was served
to us,
especially
the authentic style
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Biriyani
which my wife
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loved
the most. The customer service was
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top notch
which needs a special appreciation. The ambience was
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just
fantastic with the best Indian classical music
being played
in the background. This is one of the best
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restaurants
I had food in the recent times.

I would definitely pay a visit again
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soon
and would
also
recommend my friends the same.

Thank you,

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Sandesh
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS essay letter to the restaurant that you enjoyed 1. describe your visit 2. reason 3. what did u like the most v. 1

Essay
  American English
8 paragraphs
270 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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