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letter to sale my ancient watch

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I write to express my delight about ancient hand watch which was i brought from the London antiques market I write to see if you can help me to sell this watch on your shop the hand watch is belongs to the bygone Era it is made up by silver, gold and copper with clear transparent glass on the dual the best thing of this watch is that it is working without any cell and battery backup system moreover we can easily see time and date in the night due to light sensor system fitted on it when i searched on google top antique's shop i found your shop name on the top that is why i approach you to sell my watch the watch is eye catching by its look I trust the information and there has been of assistance to you I will be there accept me to sell it shall be available to ensure if all the questions or query from your side as I look forward to a prompt response from your end

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 me to sell this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
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 is that it is working without any cell and battery backup system moreover
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 found your shop name on the top that is
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 approach you to sell my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtimepiecewristwatch
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