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Some Employ want to commination with there staff at all the time.

Some Employ want to commination with there staff at all the time. 70Pw6

work is a structural function for build up personal and professional identity. This is important to make money, self-confidence, and physical and mental health wellbeing. people work for 8 hours a day and 6 days a week. so they only got one day leave. This is his/her day. This one day an employ make plans for relax. prepare themself for the coming week. therefore it is a very bad concept to communicate with them all the time. As a person is spending a whole eight hours at the workplace, giving him work after his allocated time will be an injustice. Everyone have a family life where the person needs to spend time. The Stuff must have a personal time where he/she will spend time for themselves. It is mandatory for self-development. Being connected with stuff all the time might be helpful for the development of a healthy work enviroment. It will help to know each other better, increase the teamwork spirit, help to build leadership. Can be a great way to be connected with the current issue of office. If any problem occers at any time, people will be avaible to solve the issue. But overall this action has more disadvantages than advantages. Because human being in not robot. People need break, refreshment to live a joyful life.

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work
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important
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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wellbeing
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPeople
people
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work
 for 8 hours a day and 6 days a week. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
 they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 one day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
. This is his/her day. This one day an employ This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 plans for relax. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterPrepare
prepare
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themself
 for the coming week. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?therefore,
therefore
 it is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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bad
 concept to communicate with them all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
. As a person is spending a whole eight hours at the workplace, giving him You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
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time
 will be an injustice. Everyone Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "has".has
have
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time
. The Stuff This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
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time where
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time
 for themselves. It is mandatory for self-development. Being connected
 with stuff all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 might be helpful for the development of a healthy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
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enviroment
. It will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to know each other better, increase the teamwork spirit, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to build leadership. Can be a great way to be connected
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 issue of office. If any problem Possible spelling mistake found.occursockers
occers
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time
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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avaible
 to solve the issue. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
overall
 this action has more disadvantages than advantages. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 human being in not robot. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 need break, refreshment to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a joyful life. 