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letter to attent light and sound show

letter to attent light and sound show 1bkKW

I like to express my enthusiasm after I attended light and sound show in my town I am sure it is again organised for next month and I invited you to come over to my place to watch this so it is an event conducted for today's it is a combination of light water and sound the ancient history of our country will be displayed and explained with beautiful water colours. the are marvellous i hope you recall a similar event which has taken place during our college time I remember you enjoy watching those fountains this is a little different same with same narrationsit will most probably happen between 21st December to 26 December you better plan your stay for a week because the rest of the days I will take you around the town for some traditional shopping I am writing to meet you please inform me once you book the tickets

I like to express my enthusiasm after I attended light and sound This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 in my town I am sure it is again Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 for next
 month and I invited you to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over to my place to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 this This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it is an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 conducted for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
's it is a combination of light water and sound the ancient history of our country will be displayed
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 water Possible spelling mistake. 'colours' is British English.colors
colours
. Did you mean "they are" or "there are"?they arethere are
the are
Possible spelling mistake. 'marvellous' is British English.marvelous
marvellous
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 hope you recall a similar This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 which has taken place during our college time I remember you enjoy watching those fountains this is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 same with same Possible spelling mistake found.narration sitnarrations it
narrationsit
 will most probably
 happen between 21st December to 26 December you better plan your stay for a week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the rest of the days I will take you around the town for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 traditional shopping I am writing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 inform me once you book the Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphtickets.tickets!tickets?tickets:tickets,tickets;
tickets