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How can you differentiate life as a first year student in university and life on high school students in Thailand ?

How can you differentiate life as a first year student in university and life on high school students in Thailand? VYxpQ
We all realize High school and University life is so vastly different. We all begin with an ordinary student who wakes up at 7. 00 AM. going to school and studying eight periods per day. We passed the critical time when we had to take the admission test. Until Now, we are freshy in the college, learning in the particular track. These whole things have taught me a lot about how to balance my life and education. Honestly, Now I still not be professional at time management.
We all realize High school and University life is
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. We all
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with an ordinary student who wakes up at 7. 00 AM. going to school and studying eight periods per day. We passed the critical time when we had to take the admission
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. Until
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, we are
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in the college, learning in the particular
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. These whole things have taught me a lot about how to balance my life and education.
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not be professional at time management.

IELTS essay How can you differentiate life as a first year student in university and life on high school students in Thailand?

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