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A time you were taken to hospital after an accident

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Last year I got involved in a massive car accident. One afternoon, as I was crossing the street, a pickup truck from afar hit me. I felt dizzy after that and couldn’t control my bike then i fall at full length. The next morning, I woke up in a white suit at the hospital. I was scared when I was surrounded by strangers except for my father sitting next to me. The doctor said i had light trauma in the head but everything was fine, i stayed there for 2 days and then came back home. Honestly, I couldn't believe my eyes, everything happened so suddenly and unexpectedly. All in all, it was an unforgettable experience in my life.
Last year I
got
involved in a massive car accident. One afternoon, as I was crossing the street, a pickup truck from afar hit me. I felt dizzy after that and couldn’t control my bike then
i
fall at full length. The
next
morning, I woke up in a white suit at the hospital. I
was scared
when I
was surrounded
by strangers
except for
my father sitting
next
to me. The doctor said
i
had light trauma in the head
but
everything was fine,
i
stayed there for 2 days and then came back home.
Honestly
, I couldn't believe my eyes, everything happened
so
suddenly
and
unexpectedly
. All in all, it was an unforgettable experience in my life.
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IELTS essay A time you were taken to hospital after an accident

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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