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Leisure Time - Hobby - Cycling

Leisure Time - Hobby - Cycling mbEdL

everyone has at least one leisure pursuit and I am no exception. If I have more spare time in the future, I will take upcycling. Cycling is a healthy, low-impact exercise that can be enjoyed by people of all ages, from young children to older adults. It is also fun, cheap, and good for the environment. unlike some other sports, cycling does not require high levels of physical skill. To get started, I’ll need a suitable bike and learn the basics of riding and traffic rules carefully. Cycling can improve physical and mental health and reduce the chances of experiencing many health problems. Riding a bike for 30 minutes a day helps me keep fit and by burning calories, it’ll make me look slimmer. In fact, Cycling regulates heart rate, increases brainpower, and makes us healthier, and that are the reasons why cycling will add years to our life. Besides, This hobby can help you feel more calm and satisfied, so you will have better relationships and make more friends too. On the other hand, Cycling is a great replacement for transport options that involve sitting in traffic for extended periods because it’s environmentally friendly and can reduce our carbon footprint. I will take up cycling in the future for a better life.

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everyone
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pursuit and
 I am no exception. If I have more spare time in the future, I will take Possible spelling mistake found.up cycling
upcycling
.

Cycling is a healthy, low-impact exercise that can be enjoyed
 by This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of all ages, from young children to older adults. It is also
 fun, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 for the environment. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterUnlike
unlike
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other sports, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
cycling
 does not require high levels of physical This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiency
skill
. To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
, I’ll need a suitable bike and learn the basics of riding and traffic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
carefully
.

Cycling can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 physical and mental health and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the chances of experiencing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 health problems. Riding a bike for 30 minutes a day This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 fit and by burning calories, it’ll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 me look slimmer. In fact, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
Cycling
 regulates heart rate, increases brainpower, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 us healthier, and that are the reasons why You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
cycling
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 years to our life. Besides
, This hobby can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 you feel more calm and satisfied, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you will have better relationships and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 more friends too. On the other hand
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
Cycling
 is a great replacement for transport options that involve sitting in traffic for extended periods This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it’s environmentally
 friendly and can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 our carbon footprint. I will take up You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
cycling
 in the future for a better life. 