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alway
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people
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different
. 1 is angel and 1 is demon. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, when you intend to do something, the angel said hey, you need hurry up, you don't You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 miss the deadline, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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begin
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the demons said: Sound ridiculous huh, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 once or you were still
 young, exploding, do everything you like, every thing you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
, everything you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
. Of course
, the demons Possible spelling mistake found.awayalwaysallayAmwayElwayGalway
alway
 victory and the loser Possible spelling mistake found.awayalwaysallayAmwayElwayGalway
alway
 is angel. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the question is how can Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 become the winner? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
 is a massive challenge. Possible mistake. Please verify.
I high
 recommend for you solution:Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis)
 )
). This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 about why you do that? This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWho
who
 is a person you The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "want"want
wants
 / wanted "wanted become" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try "become" or "to be become".becometo be become
become
? Focus on. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
, if you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 to go somewhere, you need pay to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 there. 