Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Leisure time activities preference change according to the trend, not for the personal interest .do u agree or disagree?

Leisure time activities preference change according to the trend, not for the personal interest. do u agree or disagree? gq87L
Hobbies and interests are considered as ever-changing because of the arrival of the latest fashion and trends, which is in progress. In this regard, in the salad days of Millennium, leisure time activities and preferences change according to the current fashion trend. however, they are not actually in the interest of the people. To begin with, the primary reason for this is the Rapid growth of Technology, social media plays a vital role in modifying fashion and individuals always follow the trend without any second thought. to be clearer, Facebook Instagram, and other social platforms inform the public about the new style of the world, and at the same time, people intended to do for the sake of the public. for example, American scientist Richard found that by a popular survey most of the people who are actively participating in real and Tiktok on Instagram are only for grabbing public attention, not for personal interest. social network activists are the attention seekers rather than interest seeker In addition, yet another reason for this is the adoption of fashion and trends of the developed countries. to precise, in this cutting era, this is most commonly seen in developing countries. every Nation has its fashion and culture in food, culture, and lifestyle so on. from viewpoint of people in developed countries they like to follow and take part in the fashion and culture of developed countries, for instance, one of the studies conducted by the Oxford University has revealed that most of the Indian like noodles and it is a cultural part of Chinese food. people want to eat this food as a tent. even if it is not according to personal taste. Therefore anyone can say without any doubt that new style of food is the alleviate individual taste and preference. To recapitulate, technological advancement and the adoption of other countries' culture and fashion leads to a decline the personal interest in their leisure time activities. this is the reason why I agree with it hence it is hoped that everyone has their passion to do in their past time. so, stick to it without bothering the public and it is good to get individual satisfaction in future.
Hobbies and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interests
are considered
as ever-changing
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of the arrival of the latest
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashion
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trends
, which is in progress.

In this regard, in the salad days of Millennium, leisure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
activities and preferences
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
according to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
however
, they are not actually in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, the primary reason for this is the Rapid growth of Technology, social media plays a vital role in modifying
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashion
and individuals always follow the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trend
without any second
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
to
be clearer, Facebook Instagram, and other social platforms inform the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
about the new style of the world, and at the same
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
intended to do for the sake of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
for
example, American scientist Richard found that by a popular survey most of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who are
actively
participating in real and
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tiktok
on Instagram are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
for grabbing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
attention, not for personal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
social
network activists are the attention seekers
rather
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
seeker
In addition
,
yet
another reason for this is the adoption of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashion
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
trends
of the developed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
to
precise, in this cutting era, this is most
commonly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in developing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
every
Nation has its
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashion
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
, and lifestyle
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
on. from viewpoint of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
in developed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
they like to follow and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashion
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
of developed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
countries
,
for instance
, one of the studies conducted by the Oxford University has revealed that most of the Indian like noodles and it is a cultural part of Chinese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
people
want to eat this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
as a tent.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
even
if it is not according to personal taste.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Therefore
anyone can say without any doubt that new style of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
is
After 'the', do not use a verb. Make sure that the spelling of 'alleviate' is correct. If 'alleviate' is the first word in a compound adjective, use a hyphen between the two words. Note: This error message can occur if you use a verb as a noun, and the word is not a noun in standard English.
the alleviate
individual taste and preference.

To recapitulate, technological advancement and the adoption of other countries'
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
culture
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fashion
leads to a decline the personal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interest
in their leisure
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
activities.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
this
is the reason why I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with it
hence
it
is hoped
that everyone has their passion to do in their past
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
so
, stick to it without bothering the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
public
and it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
individual satisfaction
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Leisure time activities preference change according to the trend, not for the personal interest. do u agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
367 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts