To have an idol to whom you desires to be similar is nothing out of the ordinary. It’s not an exception for me to have such a distinguished sister, who has gradually filled me with confidence and desire to become a lead vocalist of a music band at the present.
My older sibling, who was a recognized member of one of the most renowned rock bands back then owning to a great flair for being good at singing the treble, used to bring younger me with any time she had a rehearsal. Whenever the joyful melody emerged from her utterly extraordinary soprano voice, everyone from her brother down to the whole auditorium was thunderstruck. She had been in fact highly praised for her musical talent showed at an early age. It’s was when she was at the age of seven that my parents were near tears listening to her singing and thus immediately sent her to City Cultural Centre for the purpose of improvement. This is quite a place beyond the capability of an average seven-year-old, hence, both my admiration for her and the motivation to be a singer since then.
Certainly, it is undoubtedly her voice that I want to possess for all time. No one can deny that strenuous efforts need to be made throughout even a whole lifetime to be like her. Having been under her shadow, for a time, I thought that my voice would not be nearly as beautiful as she was until when she stopped her singing career for following another path and gave me the lead vocalist position of her band. It’s understood that no incompetent person is able to gain the recognition of all the members without owning the gift. I became a lead vocalist that way.
My sister has had an enormous impact on not only me but also numerous youngsters who want to embark on the artistic voyage. 
To have an idol to whom you  
desires
 to be similar is nothing out of the ordinary. It’s not an exception for me to have such a distinguished sister, who has  
gradually
 filled me with confidence and desire to become a lead vocalist of a music band at the present.
My older sibling, who was a recognized member of one of the most renowned rock bands back then owning to a great flair for being  
good
 at singing the treble,  
used
 to bring younger me with any time she had a rehearsal. Whenever the joyful melody emerged from her  
utterly
 extraordinary soprano voice, everyone from her brother down to the whole auditorium was thunderstruck. She had been in fact  
highly
 praised for her musical talent  
showed
 at an early age.  
It’s was
 when she was at the age of seven that my parents were near tears listening to her singing and  
thus
 immediately  
sent
 her to City Cultural  
Centre
 for the purpose of improvement. This is quite a place beyond the capability of an average seven-year- 
old
,  
hence
, both my admiration for her and the motivation to be a singer since then. 
Certainly
, it is  
undoubtedly
 her voice that I want to possess for all time. No one can deny that strenuous efforts need to  
be made
 throughout even a whole lifetime to be like her. Having been under her shadow, for a time, I  
thought
 that my voice would not be  
nearly
 as  
beautiful
 as she was until when she  
stopped
 her singing career for following another path and gave me the lead vocalist position of her band. It’s understood that no incompetent person is able to gain the recognition of all the members without owning the gift. I became a lead vocalist that way.
My sister has had an enormous impact on not  
only
 me  
but
  also
 numerous youngsters who want to embark on the artistic voyage.