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MY HOBBY THAT I LOVE MOST

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My hobby is watching movies. For me, watching movies is a special activity that not only helps me to relax, but also gains knowledge for me. I watch many types of movies, like romance, horror, action, comedy, but the ones I like most are dramas, movies that often focus on telling the story of the life or a period in the life of the main character. Drama films have many meanings in them, like telling yourself how to be ambitious with your passion and to crave the limelight or never give up your dream. I think you will like it very much. What’s more, when I watch it, I can feel myself in the main character, knowing about their life and seeing the things that they have been to. Because my schedule is very busy, I often watch drama movies with my sister on the weekend. For some people, watching movies is a ridiculous hobby, but for me, movies make you become the real you and teach you a lot of things that will help you one day, which is why I really love and enjoy them so much
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the ones I like most are dramas,
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focus on telling the story of the life or a period in the life of the main character. Drama films have
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IELTS essay MY HOBBY THAT I LOVE MOST

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
188 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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