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MY HOBBY THAT I LOVE MOST

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My hobby is watching movies. For me, watching movies is a special activity that not only helps me to relax, but also gains knowledge for me. I watch many types of movies, like romance, horror, action, comedy, but the ones I like most are dramas, movies that often focus on telling the story of the life or a period in the life of the main character. Drama films have many meanings in them, like telling yourself how to be ambitious with your passion and to crave the limelight or never give up your dream. I think you will like it very much. What’s more, when I watch it, I can feel myself in the main character, knowing about their life and seeing the things that they have been to. Because my schedule is very busy, I often watch drama movies with my sister on the weekend. For some people, watching movies is a ridiculous hobby, but for me, movies make you become the real you and teach you a lot of things that will help you one day, which is why I really love and enjoy them so much
My hobby is watching
movies
. For me, watching
movies
is a special activity that not
only
helps
me to relax,
but
also
gains knowledge for me. I
watch
many
types of
movies
, like romance, horror, action, comedy,
but
the ones I like most are dramas,
movies
that
often
focus on telling the story of the life or a period in the life of the main character. Drama films have
many
meanings in them, like telling yourself how to be ambitious with your passion and to crave the limelight or never give up your dream. I
think
you will like it
very
much. What’s more, when I
watch
it, I can feel myself in the main character, knowing about their life and seeing the things that they have been to.
Because
my schedule is
very
busy, I
often
watch
drama
movies
with my sister on the weekend. For
some
people
, watching
movies
is a ridiculous hobby,
but
for me,
movies
make
you become the real you and teach you
a lot of
things that will
help
you one day, which is why I
really
love
and enjoy them
so
much
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IELTS essay MY HOBBY THAT I LOVE MOST

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