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I’m really exciting when receiving this topic because I basically catching up on busniess news. When it comes to successful company, I would like to talk about a tech giant in my country which was called FPT Corporation. FPT is the leader in several business areas in Vietnam: Software outsourcing; System integration; Software development; IT services, etc. FPT is the largest ICT company in the private sector in Vietnam with a greater number of employees who work in friendly inhabitants, always by your side whenever you face a big hurdle or impossible problems. They also support and help you taclke this certain issues together. Furthermore, The desire to build of company which committed to the highest level of customer satisfaction, contributed to the nation’s prosperity and providing its employees with the most favorable work environment possible, enabling them to reach their full potential in terms of their careers and personal lives. Honestly, I feel proud of its success even tho

I’m really exciting when receiving this topic because I basically catching up on busniess news. When it comes to successful company, I would like to talk about a tech giant in my country which was called FPT Corporation. FPT is the leader in several business areas in Vietnam: Software outsourcing; System integration; Software development; IT services, etc. FPT is the largest ICT company in the private sector in Vietnam with a greater number of employees who work in friendly inhabitants, always by your side whenever you face a big hurdle or impossible problems. They also support and help you taclke this certain issues together. Furthermore, The desire to build of company which committed to the highest level of customer satisfaction, contributed to the nation’s prosperity and providing its employees with the most favorable work environment possible, enabling them to reach their full potential in terms of their careers and personal lives. Honestly, I feel proud of its success even tho 3WgDd
I’m really exciting when receiving this topic because I basically catching up on busniess news. When it comes to successful company, I would like to talk about a tech giant in my country which was called FPT Corporation. FPT is the leader in several business areas in Vietnam: Software outsourcing; System integration; Software development; IT services, etc. FPT is the largest ICT company in the private sector in Vietnam with a greater number of employees who work in friendly inhabitants, always by your side whenever you face a big hurdle or impossible problems. They also support and help you taclke this certain issues together. Furthermore, The desire to build of company which committed to the highest level of customer satisfaction, contributed to the nation’s prosperity and providing its employees with the most favorable work environment possible, enabling them to reach their full potential in terms of their careers and personal lives. Honestly, I feel proud of its success even though I am just an outsider. Plus, the scientists who run a substaintal business has earned my respect, they was in numerous powerful positions in technology. In the future I would like to become a successful software developer and FPT is absolutely the best choice for me to apply.
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IELTS essay I’m really exciting when receiving this topic because I basically catching up on busniess news. When it comes to successful company, I would like to talk about a tech giant in my country which was called FPT Corporation. FPT is the leader in several business areas in Vietnam: Software outsourcing; System integration; Software development; IT services, etc. FPT is the largest ICT company in the private sector in Vietnam with a greater number of employees who work in friendly inhabitants, always by your side whenever you face a big hurdle or impossible problems. They also support and help you taclke this certain issues together. Furthermore, The desire to build of company which committed to the highest level of customer satisfaction, contributed to the nation’s prosperity and providing its employees with the most favorable work environment possible, enabling them to reach their full potential in terms of their careers and personal lives. Honestly, I feel proud of its success even tho

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