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LEARNING SOMETHING NEW THAT CAN HELF IN FUTURE

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Life is full of ups and downs. In life, everybody has to struggle to achieve a goal at any stage. He has to overcome and go for the future to do well in long run. In that process, he has to learn new things that can serve him in long run. like this, when I got admitted to the university, I had to learn English properly to adjust myself to the university's environment. I think this capability will benefit me in the future. I was a student of Bangla medium school. as Bangladeshi English is our second language. I was not conscious about English in my childhood that's why I was weak in the English language till my young age. all of our secondary and higher secondary school curricula was been held in Bangla. That's why I don't feel any problem in those periods but when I got admitted to a university, the situation was changed. there I had to read books in English, write on examinations in English, listen to lectures in English. I fall into deep trouble. then I realized that I had to learn English if I want to do well in academics. after that I did a consultation with one of my teachers. He advised me to read English Newspapers daily and listen to English news daily. after that, I did those works daily such as I read 'New York times ' and listen to BBC news daily. On the first day, I faced many problems understanding the meanings of a report from the New York Times. but I continued reading the same passage again and again to understand the full meaning. In this process, I took help from Google Search Engine to determine the exact meaning of a word and its uses. I did the same in the case of listening. After practicing some days I became proficient in English and thus I understood my class properly and do well in my result. proficiency in English boosts my result. and in my 3rd year, I did excellent in my presentation because at that moment I became good at English. I learned English when I faced a problem but it became my best decision. Now I think that knowledge of English will help me a lot in my MBA program as I want to go abroad for higher education. In Abroad, I have to deal with everything in English as English is an international language. So, It can be said that sometimes you have to learn something new to survive but that can be beneficial in long run.
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struggle to achieve a goal at any stage. He
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overcome and go for the future to do well in long run. In that process, he
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learn
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things that can serve him in long run.
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like
this, when I
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got
admitted to the university, I had to
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learn
English
properly
to adjust myself to the university's environment. I
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think
this capability will benefit me in the future.

I was a student of
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Bangla
medium school.
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as
Bangladeshi English is our second language. I was not conscious about English in my childhood that's why I was weak in the English language till my young age.
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all
of our secondary and higher secondary school curricula
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Bangla
. That's why I don't feel any problem in those periods
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when I
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got
admitted to a university, the situation was
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changed
.
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there
I had to read books in English, write on examinations in English, listen to lectures in English. I fall into deep trouble.
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then
I realized that I had to
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learn
English if I want to do well in academics.
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after
that I did a consultation with one of my teachers. He advised me to read English Newspapers
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daily
and listen to English
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news
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daily
.
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after
that, I did those works
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daily
such as I read '
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New York times
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and listen to BBC
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news
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. On the
first
day, I faced
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problems understanding the meanings of a report from the
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New
York Times.
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but
I continued reading the same passage again and again to understand the full meaning. In this process, I took
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help
from Google Search Engine to determine the exact meaning of a word and its
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uses
. I did the same in the case of listening. After practicing
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days I became proficient in English and
thus
I understood my
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class
properly
and do well in my result.
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proficiency
in English boosts my result.
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and
in my 3rd year, I did excellent in my presentation
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because
at that moment I became
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good
at English. I learned English when I faced a problem
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but
it became my best decision.
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Now
I
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think
that knowledge of English will
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help
me a lot in my MBA program as I want to go abroad for higher education. In Abroad, I
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have to
deal with everything in English as English is an international language.
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to survive
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that can be beneficial in long run.
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IELTS essay LEARNING SOMETHING NEW THAT CAN HELF IN FUTURE

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
432 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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