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effect of electronic devices

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As generally accepted, the electronic inventions have knock on impact which are not ignorable. the recently researches prove that they can lead to pain in wrist, eye-strain and headache, as well as stress when you are using computers or mobile devices at work or at home. In addition, it can cause poor sleeping. also, one of the major reasons of cancer is the radiation of electronic devices which produce microwave. also, these inventions result in making a great progress in medicine.

As generally
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
accepted
, the electronic inventions have knock on impact which are not ignorable. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 recently researches prove that they can lead to pain in wrist, eye-strain and headache, as well
 as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 when you are using computers or mobile devices at work or at home. In addition
, it can cause poor sleeping. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlso
also
, one of the major reasons of cancer is the radiation of electronic devices which produce microwave. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAlso
also
, these inventions result in making Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "great progress".great progress
a great progress
 in medicine. 