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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English?? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and , if so how? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? ? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so how? RBJo
Undoubtedly, in this contemporary era, linguistics play most vital role in every aspect of life. Nowadays, the importance of English language has been taught frequently rather than home language which could cause extinction of local tongue. In my opinion, learning multi language are beneficial for everyone and I will discuss both views that why people should not merely depend on dominant language. To commence with language has there own imperative crucially. On one approach, it is essential that people should learn English language owing to the fact that this has become the second global language. Also, it is widely used in international summit on regular basis. For instance, an article was published in 'THE TIMES' that English is the only language which have taken place in business, science and modern technology. As a result, it is convenient through using English language in every profession as well as in foreign countries. Despite one argument, there is another point also that depending on one language could damage local languages. One approach is that, if people will not continue to keep talk in their mother language then it could be disappeared. Regarding this if masses would stay in touch in there own language at home or outside then they can help their offspring to get used to in it. For instance, a survey was conducted that, kids like to talk in home language and helps volunteer in their schools as multilingual. Hence, if we depend on one language then it could be disastrous for other cultural languages. To conclude, my opinion, learning English language is critical on the contrary on the other hand staying in a dominant language could be harmful for other cultures. As, a result multilingual person can be more prominent in every field.
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which have taken place in business, science and modern technology.
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in every profession
as well
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then it could
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is critical
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staying in a dominant
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could be harmful for other cultures.
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IELTS essay Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? ? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so how?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.0
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