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A few years ago, Its a love story of mine. In 2017, 1st Feb. I met with her at ICPA for the first time. I clearly remembered that moment of her entering the classroom. WOW, I should say she looked like a fairy and could not move my eyes from her. She had dressed up unique and modern culture (Pink+Black Colour combination). For me, it was love at the first side. I couldn't talk anything but have seen her all the time at class. Honestly say, my love had been blooming in each minutes. It was the shortest day of class in my life at ICPA. After finishing the class she said bye to everyone and I had risen my hand to say bye also but she did not noticed. I planned now to how to approach to her as soon as possible. Second day I had sitten next to her. She and her friends actually talked each other about the notes of last class and fortunately I heard that. I thought, it would be wise to take this chance. As a result I approached with my notes to her and asked please take my notes. Then she started writing of my notes. I felt pleasure even she did not talk to me yet, ohhh I cannot express in words.
A few years ago,
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Its
a
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love
story of mine. In 2017, 1st Feb. I met with her at
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ICPA
for the
first
time. I
clearly
remembered that moment of her entering the classroom. WOW, I should say she looked like a fairy and could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
my eyes from her. She had dressed up unique and modern culture (Pink+Black
Possible spelling mistake. 'Colour' is British English.
Colour
combination). For me, it was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
at the
first
side. I couldn't talk anything
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but
have
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seen
her all the time at
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class
.
Honestly
say, my
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love
had been blooming in each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "minute"?
minutes
. It was the shortest day of
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class
in my life at
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ICPA
. After finishing the
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class
she said bye to everyone and I had risen my hand to say bye
also
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but
she did not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "notice"?
noticed
. I planned
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now
to how to approach to her as
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soon
as possible. Second day I had
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sitten
next
to her. She and her friends actually talked each other about the notes of last
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
and
fortunately
I heard that. I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
, it would be wise to take this chance.
As a result
I approached with my notes to her and asked
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
take my notes. Then she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
writing of my notes. I felt pleasure even she did not talk to me
yet
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
ohhh
I cannot express in words.
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IELTS essay fufufyffyufyugfjygfggygygfygfygiygiygigiggigiyigigkg

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
220 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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