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Contact lens wear is important factor for infectious corneal ulcers in the world

Contact lens wear is important factor for infectious corneal ulcers in the world 9pW3
Contact lens wear is important factor for infectious corneal ulcers in the world. Approximately, two million new corneal ulcers occur every year in Asia and Africa. This clinical condition is a vision-threatening unless treated during the acute state. Effective treatment of corneal ulcers is related on the identification of the origin's problem. Increasing reports of clinical defeat to treat the most common infectious (bacterial) corneal ulcers are increasing nowadays. In this report, a complementary treatment of corneal ulcer using bioresonance method is described to determine the electromagnetic field can improve intractable corneal ulcer. They are currently used for the treatment of chronic wounds and have been reported as a successful treatment for corneal wound healing. Case report: The patient was a 65 years old man that referred to an ophthalmologist to treat cataract. During the eye operation, due to a medical error, lens was scratched. After that, the patient underwent a problem in light reflection on vision. In second operation his lens was replaced, then corneal ulcer has happened. He suffers from a foreign body sensation in the eye that is accompanied by severe pain and tears. His visual acuity has never changed. Slit-lamp examination of the eye revealed paracentral corneal ulcer with diffuse corneal edema (figure1). The patient uses sodium chloride and tetracycline eye drops regularly. Due to lack of healing, the wound was burned five times with laser surgery but there was no significant improvement in patient's condition. She had no previous history of bacterial keratitis. He referred to the Bioresonance center where he had been treated with electromagnetic frequency complements for one year. According to the final optician's report, lens bandage was removed also the ulcer is stable without any fluid. Now, he not only hasn't worn contact lens for a long time but also hasn't experienced of severe pain or sensitivity to light in recent weeks.
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factor for infectious corneal
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ulcers
in the world. Approximately, two million new corneal
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ulcers
occur every year in Asia and Africa. This clinical condition is a vision-threatening unless treated during the acute state. Effective
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treatment
of corneal
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ulcers
is related
on the identification of the origin's problem. Increasing reports of clinical defeat to treat the most common infectious (bacterial) corneal
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ulcers
are increasing nowadays. In this report, a complementary
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treatment
of corneal
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ulcer
using
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bioresonance
method is
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described
to determine the electromagnetic field can
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improve
intractable corneal
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ulcer
. They are
currently
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used
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treatment
of chronic wounds and have
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treatment
for corneal wound healing.

Case report:

The patient was a 65 years
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old
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man
that referred to an ophthalmologist to treat cataract. During the
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eye
operation, due to a medical error,
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lens
was scratched
. After that, the patient underwent a problem in light reflection on vision. In second operation his
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lens
was replaced
, then corneal
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ulcer
has happened. He suffers from a foreign body sensation in the
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eye
that
is accompanied
by severe pain and tears. His visual acuity has never
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changed
. Slit-lamp examination of the
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eye
revealed
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paracentral
corneal
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ulcer
with diffuse corneal edema (figure1). The patient
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uses
sodium chloride and tetracycline
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eye
drops
regularly
. Due to lack of healing, the wound
was burned
five times with laser surgery
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but
there was no significant improvement in patient's condition. She had no previous history of bacterial keratitis. He referred to the
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Bioresonance
center where he had
been treated
with electromagnetic frequency complements for one year. According to the final optician's report,
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lens
bandage
was removed
also
the
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ulcer
is stable without any fluid.
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Now
, he not
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only
hasn't worn contact
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lens
for a long time
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but
also
hasn't experienced of severe pain or sensitivity to light in recent weeks.
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IELTS essay Contact lens wear is important factor for infectious corneal ulcers in the world

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