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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: learning an additional language is a good way to improve one’s job prospects in any field?

: learning an additional language is a good way to improve one’s job prospects in any field? Agq3l
In my opinion, there are many advantages when we can speak an additional language besides our mother tongue. It will help us boost our performance in working efficiently and professionally, broaden our work opportunities in other countries and increase our connections. To begin with, we can have more chances to access any occupations in the world and likewise enhance our skills. When communicating in another language fluently, we don’t just work in our country so we are able to access the multinational firms. By that way, we can explore and experience a lot of enterprises and also their culture and operation. From that, we will acquire many various knowledge and sets of skills. Furthermore, we can update our expertise through reading and searching some foreign documents. That is the best way to improve ourselves and broaden our perspective. Another reason, it will help us increase our connections. Besides, we not only work and build the relationships in our nation but also can make friends with people all over the world whose language is common. Anyway, we can get into partnership with anyone. Finally, being bilingual is a significant strength which will help us in working better and competing with other people on the ground. I believe the modern day really needs us to be able to speak two languages and even more than that, and work with a variety of people in many countries. Hence, being capable of speaking an additional language will help us boost our capabilities and performances effectively and efficiently. All in all, I believe we know other languages which will help us increase our performance, broaden our connection and have plenty of opportunities to work and build our career. It can’t be denied that it is a good and ideal way to strengthen our job prospects in any field.
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advantages when we can speak an additional
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language
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help
us boost our performance in working
efficiently
and
professionally
, broaden our
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work
opportunities in other countries and increase our connections.

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begin
with, we can have more chances to access any occupations in the world and
likewise
enhance our
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skills
. When communicating in another
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language
fluently
, we don’t
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just
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work
in our country
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so
we are able to access the multinational firms. By that way, we can explore and experience
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a lot of
enterprises and
also
their culture and operation. From that, we will acquire
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many
various knowledge and sets of
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skills
.
Furthermore
, we can update our expertise through reading and searching
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some
foreign documents.
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the best way to
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improve
ourselves and broaden our perspective.

Another reason, it will
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help
us increase our connections.
Besides
, we not
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work
and build the relationships in our nation
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make
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people
all over the world whose
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language
is common. Anyway, we can
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get
into partnership with anyone.

Finally
, being bilingual is a significant strength which will
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help
us in working better and competing with other
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people
on the ground. I believe the modern day
really
needs us to be able to speak two
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languages
and even more than that, and
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work
with a variety of
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people
in
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many
countries.
Hence
, being capable of speaking an additional
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language
will
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help
us boost our capabilities and performances
effectively
and
efficiently
.

All in all, I believe we know other
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languages
which will
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help
us increase our performance, broaden our connection and have
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plenty
of opportunities to
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work
and build our career. It can’t
be denied
that it is a
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good
and ideal way to strengthen our job prospects in any field.
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IELTS essay : learning an additional language is a good way to improve one’s job prospects in any field?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
303 words
6.0
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