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Fast food companies should not be allowed the addvertisement some belive that they have right of adds. Give your opinion.

Fast food companies should not be allowed the addvertisement some belive that they have right of adds. Give your opinion. 7LmWY
Nowadays, any countries foods are available in any nations in light of the fact that advertisement. Few clouds believes that junk meal organisation should not give a permit for publicity on the contrary some folks thought that they have a power of advertise in everywhere. I personally believe that frozen food seller have in accreditment of a promote their products in any country. There are several reasons of my point of statement that will be discussed. Firstly, every business firms have right of marketing their product. People know about the product that it is a good for health or bad and vegetarian or non-vegetarian, etc. For instance, at the present time, a number of wrong Empire working in market which are manufacturing unhealthy items, and sale on food shop on the contrary advertisement is one of the best source of reaching all information to society. Fast food companies should give compulsory adds on various platforms. Another reason why I favorable of they should advertisement sometimes people do not able to cook, and any items when crowds are give first priority of order a junk food at good store if they show an advertisement of this fast food company they decided which foods are best at that time. For example, KFC food company is a worldwide. They have given on number of adds on the TV and social media due to this peoples are aware about this product quality, quantity, price, etc. The community does ordered this food without anything thinking hence food company's promotion should do compulsory for public understanding. To sum up, people should not eating any food items without knowing. Some time addvertisement is more helpful in trouble situation.
Nowadays, any countries
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foods
are available in any nations in light of the fact that
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advertisement
. Few clouds believes that junk meal
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organisation
should not give a permit for publicity
on the contrary
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some
folks
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thought
that they have a power of advertise in everywhere. I
personally
believe that frozen
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food
seller have in
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accreditment
of
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a promote
their
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products
in any country. There are several reasons of my point of statement that will
be discussed
.

Firstly
, every business firms have right of marketing their
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product
.
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People
know about the
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product
that it is a
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good
for health or
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bad
and vegetarian or non-vegetarian, etc.
For instance
, at the present time, a number of
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wrong
Empire working in market which are manufacturing unhealthy items, and sale on
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food
shop
on the contrary
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advertisement
is one of the best source of reaching all information to society.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Fast
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food
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
should give compulsory
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
on various platforms.

Another reason why I favorable of they should
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advertisement
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sometimes
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people
do not able to cook, and any items when crowds are give
first
priority of order a junk
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food
at
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good
store if they
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show
an
The usual collocation for "advertisement" is "for" not "of". Did you mean "advertisement for"?
advertisement of
this
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fast
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food
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company
they decided which
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foods
are best at that time.
For example
, KFC
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food
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company
is
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a worldwide
. They have
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given
on number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
adds
on the TV and social media due to
Did you mean "these"?
this
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peoples
are aware about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
quality, quantity, price, etc. The community does ordered this
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food
without anything thinking
hence
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food
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
's promotion should do compulsory for public understanding.

To sum up,
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people
should not
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eating
any
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food
items without knowing.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
time
Possible spelling mistake found.
addvertisement
is more helpful in trouble situation.
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IELTS essay Fast food companies should not be allowed the addvertisement some belive that they have right of adds. Give your opinion.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
281 words
6.0
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