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We have dress-up Fridays in my company- we can come to work in anything we want.

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We have dress-up Fridays in my
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company
- we can
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come
to work in anything we want. You idiot! I
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think
your head needs to examine.

He is not answering the phone. He should have gone out.

I’m Edward,
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but
I’d
rather
to call “Tom

July
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saw
a
You used an adverb ('gradually') instead of an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
gradually decrease
as economic growth
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started
to slow
generally
.

Did you mean "Somebody"?
Some body
ran in front of the car as I was driving. Luckily, I could have
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stopped
in time.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
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IELTS essay We have dress-up Fridays in my company- we can come to work in anything we want.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
75 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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