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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.13

Nowadays, it is believe that learning from ancient times has no meaning for those who are leaving in current era. I strongly disagree with this statement. I believe that we can achieve lots for knowledge by studying history. In this essay will discuss in detail. There are many benefits from leaning the past. To begin with, we can identify ancient tradition, cloths wear and lifestyle which people used to live in past. Secondly, from past bad experiences the problems are not repeated in the present or future. Moreover, we also come to know about our country that people used to live, work and struggle with out technology. By reading this people will find who time was hard in past. There are many historical events took place in the world. The first and foremost, is Nuclear bombing held by USA in Japans two major cities Hiroshima and Nagasaki thousands of peoples died in this event. Secondly, there are number of scary wars had took place such as World War 1 and World War 2 many fighter sacrifices there life in those wars. In conclusion, some people thinks that learning past is waste for time and has no advantage in todays life. But completely disagree with following line. I believe that people can get lots of commands and information's from ancient times.
Nowadays, it is
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believe
that learning from ancient
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times
has no meaning for those who are leaving in
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current
era. I
strongly
disagree with this statement. I believe that we can achieve lots for knowledge by studying history. In this essay will discuss in detail. There are
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many
benefits from leaning the
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past
. To
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begin
with, we can identify ancient tradition, cloths wear and lifestyle which
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people
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used
to
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live
in
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past
.
Secondly
, from
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past
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bad
experiences the problems are not repeated in the present or future.
Moreover
, we
also
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come
to know about our country that
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people
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used
to
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live
, work and struggle
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with out
technology. By reading this
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people
will find who
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time
was
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hard
in
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past
. There are
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many
historical
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events
took place in the world. The
first
and foremost, is Nuclear bombing held
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by USA
in Japans two major cities Hiroshima and Nagasaki thousands of
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peoples
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died
in this
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event
.
Secondly
, there are
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number of
scary
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wars
had
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took
place such as World
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War
1 and World
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War
2
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many
fighter sacrifices there life in those
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wars
.
In conclusion
,
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some
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people
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thinks
that learning
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past
is waste for
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time
and has no advantage in
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todays
life.
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But
completely disagree with following line. I believe that
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people
can
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get
lots of commands and information's from ancient
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times
.
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IELTS essay Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
220 words
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