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learing a foreign language offers an insight to how people from other culture think and see the world. The teaching of foreign language should be compulsory at all primary school.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view.

learing a foreign language offers an insight to how people from other culture think and see the world. The teaching of foreign language should be compulsory at all primary school. with this view. OVlg7
In today's era, new world of technology and education as developing country as foreign language and learning new things should be compulsory to each and every people in the world. Learning different cultures language is little difficult in old age similarly in earlier school is very easy, every child have curiosity to learning new things, so, i am in favour of, foreign language should be teach at all primary school. To begin with, every student intend to settled in abroad and for that they need to learn new language as per countries requirement such as English, Spanish, Dutch. English have a universal command in every country. Additionally, children learn language by listening to parents and people around them in childhood only. For example, in English medium primary school, every student learn English in different subjects, not only language but they can get knowledge about other cultures thinking and how people see the world. Secondly, according to the educated world, foreign institution may offers better course and jobs, also student want to attend a prestigious university. Hence, they need to learn different language as particular countries cultures need. To give specific reason, learning new language may lead to student become independent and responsible to their own work and jobs. On the flip side of it, there are many student who want to study in overseas countries, however it is useful to learn and become responsible but living in abroad may effect on mother tongue. As a result, people are not aware of their own culture also their are far from their original language. To conclude, each coin have tow sides, learning foreign language may lead to unawareness of how our cultures people leaving in and they have different strstagy to see the world, while learning new language have own benefit to communicate with other countries and their culture.
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things should be compulsory to each and every
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language
is
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difficult in
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similarly
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easy, every child have curiosity to
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things,
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,
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am in
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of,
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foreign
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language
should be
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teach
at all primary school.

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with, every
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intend to settled in abroad and for that they need to
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new
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language
as per
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requirement such as English, Spanish, Dutch. English have a universal command in every
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country
.
Additionally
, children
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learn
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language
by listening to parents and
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people
around them in childhood
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.
For example
, in English medium primary school, every
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learn
English in
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subjects, not
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language
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they can
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knowledge about other
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cultures
thinking and how
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people
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see
the world.

Secondly
, according to the educated
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world
,
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foreign
institution may offers better course and jobs,
also
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student
want to attend a prestigious university.
Hence
, they need to
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learn
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different
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language
as particular
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countries
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cultures
need. To give specific reason,
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learning
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new
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language
may lead to
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student
become independent and responsible to their
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own
work and jobs.

On the flip side of it, there are
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many
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student
who want to study in overseas
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countries
,
however
it is useful to
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learn
and become responsible
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but
living in abroad may
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effect
on mother tongue.
As a result
,
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people
are not aware of their
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culture
also
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are far from their original language.

To conclude
, each coin have tow sides,
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learning
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foreign
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language
may lead to unawareness of how our
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cultures
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people
leaving
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in and
they have
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different
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to
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the
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, while
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new
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have
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benefit to communicate with other
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and their
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.
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IELTS essay learing a foreign language offers an insight to how people from other culture think and see the world. The teaching of foreign language should be compulsory at all primary school. with this view.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
307 words
6.0
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