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Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others say it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others say it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion oR86V
Some people believe that government should be responsible for keeping the streets free of rubbish and garbage, whereas others argue that it is the responsibility of the citizens to keep their streets clean. This essay intends to analyse both perspectives. In my opinion, keeping the streets tidy requires a joint effort by the government and the residents. On the other hand, there are many reasons why some people believe that government should be responsible for keeping a city’s clean. Firstly, people have already paid a lot of taxes and so it is the onus of the government to maintain a city’s streets. Part of the tax money should be allocated for providing public waste bins on every street, collecting and disposing this waste properly on time. Secondly, it’s government responsibility to enforce strict laws and punish people who are found littering. For example, Singapore is one of the cleanest cities in the world imposes a penalty of up to SGD 1000$ on people if caught dropping litter. On the other hand, those who say that residents are responsible for clean streets argues that it’s the people that need to take personal responsibility and pride in keeping their neighbourhood clean. Government can provide public trash bins but it’s the responsibility of the citizens to make sure that they use them. If people can keep the inside of their house clean, then why not the outside. Habits like spitting in open, throwing cigarettes butts on the road need to be changed. There is not enough money or manpower to keep the city clean if the citizens are unwilling to do their part. So, people should make a conscious effort to properly dispose of their trash and train their children to do the same rather than expecting the government to do it for them. In conclusion, a combined effort by the government and citizens is the only sure and lasting solution to roadside trash and keeping the streets clean.
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. This essay intends to
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both perspectives. In my opinion, keeping the
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streets
tidy requires a joint effort by the
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and the residents.
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believe that
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should be responsible for keeping a city’s
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,
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have already paid
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taxes and
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it is the onus of the
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government
to maintain a city’s
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streets
. Part of the tax money should
be allocated
for providing public waste bins on every
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, collecting and disposing this waste
properly
on time.
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government
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to enforce strict laws and punish
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in the world imposes a penalty of up to SGD
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if caught dropping litter.
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argues that it’s the
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and pride in keeping their
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can provide public trash bins
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the city
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if the
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are unwilling to do their part.
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to do it for them.
In conclusion
, a combined effort by the
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government
and
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citizens
is the
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only
sure and lasting solution to roadside trash and keeping the
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streets
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clean
.
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IELTS essay Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others say it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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