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Last sport event you attended

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Recently, about two months ago, my sister had attended an athletic event organized for the sports day. There have been many various competitions for people of all ages. I went with her only because she needed to come with an older caretaker but it's turned out timpressive fun to watch! Unluckily, my sister's team was defeated by a group from another city. After the game we all sat with the rest of the caretakers, watching the other players fighting for getting into the finale. When it was a 15 minutes break guy my age started talking with me. He looked weirdly similar and just before the game started I figured out that he is a famous actor from a popular Netflix show!

Recently, about two months ago, my sister had attended an athletic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 organized for the sports day. There have been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 various competitions for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 of all ages. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accompanied
went with
 her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she needed to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 with an older caretaker This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it's turned out Possible spelling mistake found.impressivet impressive
timpressive
 fun to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
! Unluckily
, my sister's team was defeated
 by a group from another city.

After the game we all sat with the rest of the caretakers, watching the other players fighting for getting into the finale. “When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
 it was a 15 minutes break guy my age This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 talking with me. He looked weirdly
 similar and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the game This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 I figured out that he is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 actor from a popular Netflix This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
! 