Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Have there been changes in education system ?

Have there been changes in education system? alG9m
In today's industrialization-modernization life, people's lives have been greatly improved, all human needs are met in the best way, especially the development of the social system. Education system. As you know, education is very important for every human being. Recognizing this problem, education in recent years has been reformed a lot. If before, the world Students can only study in classrooms with ordinary books, in a cramped environment and poor facilities. Nowadays, with the development of modern technology, different forms of learning In order to ensure the best development skills and knowledge acquisition for students, each classroom is equipped with a very modern computer and projector system that makes it easier for students to learn. a class is no longer boring and becomes much more interesting so that students also remember the knowledge longer. Not only that, electronic devices such as computers, laptops, cell phones, etc. Increasing development also makes learning easier. Students do not have to go to school to learn, nor do they need to go to the library to borrow books for reference. Just a phone or computer calculator, it will help you solve everything, no need to study directly in class, but you and your students can still study effectively, no need for traditional paper books but just one click of the mouse. find everything you need. It's so convenient, isn't it?
In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
today
's industrialization-modernization life,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
have been
greatly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improved
, all human
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
needs
are met
in the best way,
especially
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
of the social system. Education system. As you know, education is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for every human being. Recognizing this problem, education in recent years has
been reformed
a lot. If
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
, the world
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Students
can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
study in classrooms with ordinary books, in a cramped environment and poor facilities. Nowadays, with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
of modern technology,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
forms of learning In order to ensure the best
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and knowledge acquisition for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
, each classroom
is equipped
with a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
modern computer and projector system that
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it easier for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
to learn.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
is no longer boring and becomes much more interesting
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
also
remember the knowledge longer. Not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
that, electronic devices such as computers, laptops, cell phones, etc. Increasing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
development
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
learning easier.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Students
do not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
go to school to learn, nor do they
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to go to the library to borrow books for reference.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Just
a phone or computer calculator, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you solve everything, no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
to study
directly
in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
you and your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
can
still
study
effectively
, no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
for traditional paper books
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
one click of the mouse.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
find
everything you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
. It's
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
convenient, isn't it?
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Have there been changes in education system?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
226 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Have there been changes in education system ?