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Last journey and the immigration

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Four years ago, since I was a bachelor, I had planned to immigrate to Europe, absolutely to Germany. To decide to abandon my country was not easy. I must be clever and keen to check out the immigrations data that I had. Also, it was necessary to use tact to choosing the best way to start that adventure. In addition, I had to qualify for that and take an oath, although immigration makes a hardship situation for me. Thus, I won the goal and got Visa to start this journey. When I was at the airport, my destination country airport, I sensed my pocket was vacant. So, I saw a gallant man, was looked like a taxi driver. I asked him to take me to the bank where I to take money from my digital wallet. He agreed, so we went, but there is something untold yet, as he looked like a jealous person, his car was not unaccustomed to be a taxi.

Four years ago, since I was a bachelor, I had planned to immigrate to Europe, absolutely
 to Germany. To decide to abandon my country was not easy. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be clever and keen to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 out the Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "immigrations'" or "immigration's"?immigrations'immigration's
immigrations
 data that I had. Also
, it was necessary to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 tact to choosing the best way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 that adventure. In addition
, I had to qualify for that and take an oath, although immigration This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 a hardship situation for me.

Thus
, I won the goal and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 Visa to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 this journey. When I was at the airport, my destination country airport, I sensed my pocket was vacant.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a gallant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
, was looked
 like a taxi driver. I asked him to take me to the bank where I to take money from my digital wallet. He This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 we went, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 there is something untold yet
, as he looked like a jealous person, his car was not unaccustomed to be a taxi. 