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large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result' people gravitate towards their products What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people tp buy local products?

large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result' people gravitate towards their products What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people tp buy local products? P80X
Big corporations have been attracted many people buy their products because of a lot of wages witch spend in advertising and marketing that leads to serious issues such as, local businesses day out and communities lost their uniqueness and I will interduce some solutions for resolve these problemsShutting down the demistic shopes are the most consider phonumon during the spread of global companies. IF the home businesses have no customers, They will be bankrupts. That means they will not survive for a long time so They will closure. For example, during globalization revelation, 60%of local companies in Saudi Arabian closed as a result of
Big
corporations have
been attracted
many
people
buy
their products
because
of
a lot of
wages witch spend in advertising and marketing that leads to serious issues such as, local
businesses
day out and communities lost their uniqueness and I will
interduce
some
solutions for resolve these
problemsShutting
down the
demistic
shopes
are the most consider
phonumon
during the spread of global
companies
. IF the home businesses have no customers, They will be bankrupts. That means they will not survive for a long time
so
They
will closure
.
For example
, during globalization revelation, 60%of local
companies
in Saudi Arabian closed
as a result
of
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IELTS essay large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result' people gravitate towards their products What problems does this cause? What could be done to encourage people tp buy local products?

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