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education still invaluable is education being devalued

education still invaluable is education being devalued G3Kgg
In past there are not any importance of degrees but now days certificate of degrees decided who is educated. Everybody is running behind degrees there is a rat run for degrees nd children lost their education values about study. So i agree that in present time education is still undervalued education. There are many examples in modern era everyone is running behind degrees no one is study in which there are interested. So they never grow himself nd gain knowledge which they are made for.
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IELTS essay education still invaluable is education being devalued

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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