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exciting experience you have had

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Today I am talking about my memorable experience. It happened when I was about 10 years old and I still remember it now. That day because my father was busy with work, he ate at the company, only me and my mother were at home. My mom cooked my favorite dish, fish braised with bananas. While cooking, my mother remembered some missing ingredients that needed to be bought, so she told me to watch the fish carefully until she came back. I nodded in agreement, but because of my curiosity, I went upstairs to watch TV and I forgot the fish pot in the kitchen. Suddenly, I smelled burning and remembered so I ran to the kitchen. As a result, the pot of fish was burnt black, at that time I was really scared and worried about being scolded by my mother, I started to cry. When she returned, I explained, so she did not blame me but she advised me to pay more attention next time. Of course, I didn't get to eat my favorite food. It's a memorable story because every time I lose focus while doing something important, I will think about the bad results later.
Today
I am talking about my memorable experience. It happened when I was about 10 years
old
and I
still
remember it
now
. That day
because
my father was busy with work, he ate at the
company
,
only
me and my mother were at home. My mom cooked my favorite dish, fish braised with bananas. While cooking, my mother remembered
some
missing ingredients that needed to be
bought
,
so
she
told
me to
watch
the fish
carefully
until she came back. I nodded in agreement,
but
because
of my curiosity, I went upstairs to
watch
TV and I forgot the fish pot in the kitchen.
Suddenly
, I smelled burning and remembered
so
I ran to the kitchen.
As a result
, the pot of fish
was burnt
black, at that time I was
really
scared and worried about
being scolded
by my mother, I
started
to cry. When she returned, I
explained
,
so
she did not blame me
but
she advised me to pay more attention
next
time.
Of course
, I didn't
get
to eat my favorite food. It's a memorable story
because
every time I lose focus while doing something
important
, I will
think
about the
bad
results later.
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IELTS essay exciting experience you have had

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
199 words
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