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Language is a way to understand someone.Researchers say that in coming days people will speak the native language.In my view,this is negative thing and cannot bring any benefits.

Language is a way to understand someone. Researchers say that in coming days people will speak the native language. In my view, this is negative thing and cannot bring any benefits. 7WR95
Speaking identical language in future would never provide benefits. This is simply because, without having knowledge of other language, there would be less opportunities in job sections. when individual will only speak familiar language, for instance, there would be numerous companies which would conduct seminars in overseas side in order to expand their business. Even they perhaps select those who are able to speak more than three different languages. Due to that, they might never get the chance to feel new culture and atmosphere which make them miserable. Consequently, not knowing such language in near future may be give profound bad effect. In addition, speaking one language which have been familiar with for a long time and not willing to aquire another one restrict people from travelling the world. In other words, if anyone wants to travel country, then they will undoubtedly encounter several unknown humans and it may be impossible for them to obtain appropriate information to reach somewhere. For example, when my brother was 8 years old, he moved to Spain but one day he lost before coming to home as he would not speak Spanish language and because of that he could not ask for help. Therefor, people are afraid to talk with someone which probably make them less confident. However, speaking same language in future will be beneficial for kids as they will come across to know the history of their country. To sum up, form the point mentioned above, despite that fact that there is no offence for keep going with one language, i strongly believe that not learning more than one language in future will not give judicious job as well as travel experience.
Speaking identical
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would never provide benefits. This is
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, without having knowledge of other
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language
, there would be
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less
opportunities in job sections.
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when
individual will
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speak familiar
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,
for instance
, there would be numerous
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companies
which would conduct seminars in overseas side in order to expand their business. Even they perhaps select those who are able to speak more than three
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different
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languages
. Due to that, they might never
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get
the chance to feel new culture and atmosphere which
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make
them miserable.
Consequently
, not knowing such
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language
in near
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future
may be give profound
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bad
effect.

In addition
, speaking one
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which have been familiar with for a long time and not willing to
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aquire
another one restrict
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people
from travelling the world.
In other words
, if anyone wants to travel country, then they will
undoubtedly
encounter several unknown humans and it may be impossible for them to obtain appropriate information to reach somewhere.
For example
, when my brother was 8 years
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, he
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moved
to Spain
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one day he lost
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before
coming to home as he would not speak Spanish
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and
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of that he could not
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ask for
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help
. Therefor,
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people
are afraid to talk with someone which
probably
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make
them less confident.
However
, speaking same
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in
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will be beneficial for kids as they will
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come
across to know the history of their country.

To sum up, form the point mentioned above, despite that fact that there is no
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offence
for
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keep
going with one
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,
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i
strongly
believe that not learning more than one
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in
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will not give judicious job
as well
as travel experience.

IELTS essay Language is a way to understand someone. Researchers say that in coming days people will speak the native language. In my view, this is negative thing and cannot bring any benefits.

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