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Lacking of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

Lacking of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems? y85D
Nowadays, shortage of fresh water is increasing widely and becoming worldwide concern, due to excessive use of water. As a result, I will examine the concequences of this shortage of water and possible solutions we could take to overcome this problem in ensuing paragraphs. Taking into account problems of this shortage, first and foremost is, if there has a poor supply of fresh water, farmers cannot grow any crops. So, farming will difficult and that may lead to death of animals and humans also. Thus, quality water is basic need of each and every living things. The another most eye-catching thing is, lack of fresh water directly affects manufacturing departments like, hydro electric energy production, water condensors and food supplies. These business fields may find it difficult. Thus, it directly affects economic sectors. Considering the possible solutions, rainwater harvesting is one of the main factor for dealing with water shortage, people need to make underground tanks to reserve rain water since rain water is fresh water and also it may reduce the shortage of water. In addition, farmers and manufactures have to stop dumping contaminated water in rivers and try to find alternatives of that because water pollution is becoming major concern in today's world. Apart from that, government should spread the message by educating better on causes and effects of water crisis on people. For instance, governments should organize events and seminars and teach others to rause awareness of fresh water needs. To sum up, the fresh water concern increases alarmingly throughout the globe and for protecting the fresh water sources, people and governments need to follow possible solutions and save water for better future.
Nowadays,
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is increasing
widely
and becoming worldwide concern, due to excessive
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use
of
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As a result
, I will examine the
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concequences
of this
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shortage
of
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and possible solutions we could take to overcome this problem in ensuing paragraphs.

Taking into account problems of this
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shortage
,
first
and foremost is, if there has a poor supply of
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fresh
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water
, farmers cannot grow any crops.
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So
, farming will difficult and that may lead to death of animals and humans
also
.
Thus
, quality
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water
is basic need of each and every living things. The another most eye-catching thing is, lack of
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fresh
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water
directly
affects manufacturing departments like,
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hydro electric
energy production,
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water
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condensors
and food supplies. These business fields may find it difficult.
Thus
, it
directly
affects economic sectors.

Considering the possible solutions, rainwater harvesting is one of the main factor for dealing with
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water
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shortage
,
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people
need to
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make
underground tanks to reserve rain
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water
since rain
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is
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fresh
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and
also
it may
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reduce
the
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.
In addition
, farmers and manufactures
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have to
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dumping contaminated
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in rivers and try to find alternatives of that
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because
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pollution is becoming major concern in
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today
's world. Apart from that,
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government
should spread the message by educating better on causes and effects of
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crisis on
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people
.
For instance
,
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governments
should organize
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events
and seminars and teach others to
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rause
awareness of
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fresh
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needs.

To sum up, the
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concern increases
alarmingly
throughout the globe and for protecting the
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fresh
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water
sources,
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people
and
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governments
need to follow possible solutions and save
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water
for better future.
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IELTS essay Lacking of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
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