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Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. v.4

Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? v. 4
In these days, ’ information technology took place of an important role in companies all over the world. Although, several developments, assisting us in scrubbing, organizing and planning our resources, which has taken the position of the workers in factories. Many numbers believe that, such machines are tough to utilize but in reality, these models are reducing the pressure from our head. Firstly, new generation products moved us toward accuracy, before we were handling our business with a notebook and pen, but now it’s moved into ipad and tablet system. Well designed model and application are helping us to design our business strategy with more revenue and less stress. A good example of that is the global online booking system. Where ever you want to travel for business purpose or for vacation, you do not need to tense about your living and travel strategies, just book a ticket and hotel online, which will take only 15 to 20 minutes. Secondly, the latest gadgets tell us about the number of people require to run a company, this will lead to an exact or minimum number of staff required for the organization. The high-tech devices are also not easy to operate for a person whose habitual of a book and pencil and not able to understand the equipment function, which is another reason of bad impact and view about the product in the company. In conclusion, we need to train our staff about the modern applications. Such kind of assistance helped them to support their families, but not let them be jobless. Apart from that, it will be more beneficial for the group to enhance their growth.
In these days,
information technology took place of an
important
role in
companies
all over the world. Although, several developments, assisting us in scrubbing, organizing and planning our resources, which has taken the position of the workers in factories.
Many
numbers believe that, such machines are tough to utilize
but
in reality, these models are reducing the pressure from our head.

Firstly
, new generation products
moved
us toward accuracy,
before
we were handling our business with a notebook and pen,
but
now
it’s
moved
into
ipad
and tablet system.
Well designed
model and application are helping us to design our business strategy with more revenue and less
stress
. A
good
example of
that is
the global online booking system. Where ever you want to travel for business purpose or for vacation, you do not need to tense about your living and travel strategies,
just
book a ticket and hotel online, which will take
only
15 to 20 minutes.

Secondly
, the latest gadgets
tell
us about the number of
people
require to run a
company
, this will lead to an exact or minimum number of staff required for the organization. The high-tech devices are
also
not easy to operate for a person whose habitual of a book and pencil and not able to understand the equipment function, which is another reason of
bad
impact and view about the product in the
company
.

In conclusion
, we need to train our staff about the modern applications. Such kind of assistance
helped
them to support their families,
but
not
let
them be jobless. Apart from that, it will be more beneficial for the group to enhance their growth.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Labour-saving devices such as dishwashers and communication tools such as computers are supposed to make our lives easier. However, some people argue that these devices only make them more difficult. Does modern technology reduce or increase stress? v. 4

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  American English
4 paragraphs
275 words
6.5
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