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Kindly evaluate and share your suggestion for improvement. New stories on TV and newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v.1

Kindly evaluate and share your suggestion for improvement. New stories on TV and newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 1
With the advanced technology and because of various new gadgets nowadays it is far easier to have a photograph of a certain incident or place. As a result, more and more articles in newspapers, as well as stories on TV, were attached with pictures which play a significant part to understand the complete perspective of the underline event. In my opinion, although visual graphics play a vital role, however, we can not underestimate the power of words. Surely pictures make a better understanding of a certain story. They did not help to visualize, but also inform those facts which can not be explained through words. Additionally, photographs show a certain part in a precise manner. For Example, a story that shares information about an accident of two vehicles might tell you about the number injuries and the way how the accident happened but only through visual effects, one can get to know about the damage done to both vehicles and severity of the accident. So, therefore, the importance of pictures is undeniable. However, words have their own place as far as news is concerned. Pictures do share noticeable information for a certain moment, however, a complete story can only be informed through words. For instance, a picture cannot answer the following: How the accident happened? What happened after it? What remedies taken by the government to reduce such accidents? Therefore, a plethora of questions remain to answer and for that word provide understanding from beginning to end about a complete story. To conclude, visuals surely have helped to present a broader view similarly importance of words lies in its own manner. All in all, both pictures and words play an imperative role to understand a certain situation.
With the advanced technology and
because
of various new gadgets nowadays it is far easier to have a photograph of a
certain
incident or place.
As a result
, more and more articles in newspapers,
as well
as
stories
on TV,
were attached
with
pictures
which play a significant part to understand the complete perspective of the underline
event
. In my opinion, although visual graphics play a vital role,
however
, we can not underestimate the power of words.

Surely
pictures
make
a better understanding of a
certain
story
. They did not
help
to visualize,
but
also
inform those facts which can not be
explained
through words.
Additionally
, photographs
show
a
certain
part
in a precise manner
.
For Example
, a
story
that shares information about an
accident
of two vehicles might
tell
you about the number injuries and the way how the
accident
happened
but
only
through visual effects, one can
get
to know about the damage done to both vehicles and severity of the
accident
.
So
,
therefore
, the importance of
pictures
is undeniable.

However
, words have their
own
place as far as news
is concerned
.
Pictures
do share noticeable information for a
certain
moment,
however
, a complete
story
can
only
be informed
through words.
For instance
, a
picture
cannot answer the following: How the
accident
happened? What happened after it? What remedies taken by the
government
to
reduce
such
accidents
?
Therefore
, a plethora of questions remain to answer and for that
word
provide understanding from beginning to
end
about a complete story.

To conclude
, visuals
surely
have
helped
to present a broader view
similarly
importance of words lies in its
own
manner. All in all, both
pictures
and words play an imperative role to understand a
certain
situation.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
21Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS essay Kindly evaluate and share your suggestion for improvement. New stories on TV and newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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