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After all the hustle one person goes through in a day, most them reach home by the night and feels refreshed since it’s something always gives positive vibes. In the recent times people from some countries are getting curious about the history of it. In this essay, I will outline the possible reasons of this growing nature and suggest some ways in researching about it. People feel more relaxed and pumped at home and that’s the point when one’s brain start’s to notices the minute minutiae of things around and some of it might intrigue them to know more about it. For example, after hectic schedule at office a person reached his/her apartment and then tries to clam down on the recliner. Since, he/she is at the pleasant state, they would have noticed that the architecture of the roof is mesmerizing. He feels so amazed and starts to learn about it more. In contrary, some of them might be impressed by it but might not be digging deep into it. However, the rate of people with the former view is high and increasing which I think is majorly due the new artistic views getting installed across the country and also occurrences of history of multiple parts are being surfaced online. Now the question is, how will one need to go about extracting this kind information? Unless it’s has something did very significant moments attached to it, it’s hard to find these details from the internet. The best way to go about it would be starting to backtrack on the ex-owners and the previous tenants because these would be the people who can either give some information or route to the correct one regarding the history. One of the other reason to go about this path would the integrity of the information. As we are dealing with the people who actually lived there or own it they would definitely have legit details of all kind. One of the drawback of this search would the time and energry that one needs to put in which can be very exhaustive but I would argue on the better and faster results over the path. To conclude, people looking at details in and around their surroundings are making them intrigued about the their own home. Thought finding out the information is really hard and exhaustive, if one put’s his/her foot front and bring all the will-power to do it it would be possible and the above given route might be the way to start off with.
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the hustle one person goes through in a day, most them reach home by the night and feels refreshed since it’s something always gives
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countries are getting curious about the history of it. In this essay, I will outline the possible reasons of this growing nature and suggest
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some
ways in researching about it.

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People
feel more relaxed and pumped at home and that’s the point when one’s brain
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start
’s to notices the minute minutiae of things around and
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some
of it
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might
intrigue them to know more about it.
For example
, after hectic schedule at office a person reached his/her apartment and then tries to clam down on the recliner. Since, he/she is at the pleasant state, they would have noticed that the architecture of the roof is mesmerizing. He feels
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so
amazed and
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starts
to learn about it more. In contrary,
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some
of them
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might
be impressed
by it
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not be digging deep into it.
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people
with the former view is high and increasing which I
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think
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majorly
due the new artistic views getting installed across the country and
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occurrences of history of multiple parts are
being surfaced
online.

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Now
the question is, how will one need to go about extracting this kind
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? Unless it’s has something did
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significant moments attached to it, it’s
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to find these
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from the internet. The best way to go about it would be starting to backtrack on the ex-owners and the previous tenants
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because
these would be the
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people
who can either give
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some
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information
or route to the correct one regarding the history. One of the other reason to go about this path would the integrity of the
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information
. As we are dealing with the
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who actually
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it they would definitely have legit
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of all kind. One of the drawback of this search would the time and
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exhaustive
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I would argue on the better and faster results over the path.

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looking at
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in and around their surroundings are making them intrigued about the their
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own
home.
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Thought
finding out the
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is
really
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and exhaustive, if one put’s his/her foot front and bring all the will-power to do
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IELTS essay jxjhb sjchu ciuh uihcuihdsbcjhds. jc hcuin

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
421 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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