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Nuclear power is used by most nations for work some say it is harmful but others against this view do advantage outweigh disadvantage

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It is true that nuclear power is utilized by multifarious countries for works some believe that it is harmful, whereas others against this view. this essay will explain it's merits overlap demerits in up comming paragraph due to weapon protection ang energy production. Commencing with the disadvantage, nuclear power has a many points behind the statement but predominant is why it is harmful for human and animals? To Explain it, if nuclear power spread increasely so it will creat nagetive affect on human and animals because nuclear power has a lot of problems such as it creat radiation and radiation is affect on people brain than majority of people dead as well as animals face lot of problems. Therefore, it creat a negative affect. On the flip side, there are several advantages regarding the view such as weapon protection. To explicate it, it is true that nuclear power using in weapons and weapons are beneficial for countries due to war because if one country have a good and danger weapons so they provide better facilities their country's people. For example, a survey was conducted by "World Security Department " In 2017 many weapons maded from nuclear power in Japan. Hence, with the help of nuclear energy country is develop day by day. Moving Further, second advantage is energy production. To elaborate it, nuclear power is save other resource such as oil, petrol, coals and more of things because if people do work with the help of nuclear power and other energy is use in limited and nuclear power not only save other resources but also gernate electronic power. For Instance, headlines of "U S A Today " published that 9 out of 10 countries use nuclear power. As a result, it is beneficial for humanIn conclusion, although nuclear power is harmful for human and animals, yet it also made a weapons and energy production.
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is utilized
by multifarious
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countries
for works
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some
believe that it is harmful, whereas others against this view.
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merits overlap demerits in up
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paragraph due to
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protection ang
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energy
production. Commencing with the disadvantage, nuclear
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power
has a
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points behind the statement
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predominant is why it is harmful for human and
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animals
? To
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it, if nuclear
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power
spread
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increasely
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it will
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creat
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nagetive
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animals
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because
nuclear
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power
has
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a lot of
problems such as it
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creat
radiation and radiation is
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people
brain than
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face
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negative
affect. On the flip side, there are several advantages regarding the view such as
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weapon
protection. To explicate it, it is true that nuclear
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power
using in
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weapons
and
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weapons
are beneficial for
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countries
due to war
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because
if one
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country
have a
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good
and
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danger
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weapons
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so
they provide better facilities their country's
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people
.
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, a survey
was conducted
by
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World Security Department
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In 2017
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many
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weapons
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maded
from nuclear
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in Japan.
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of nuclear
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energy
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is
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, second advantage is
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production. To elaborate it, nuclear
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is
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save
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because
if
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do work with the
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of nuclear
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and
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other
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energy
is
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in limited and nuclear
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not
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resources
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electronic
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power
.
For Instance
, headlines of
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U S A
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Today
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published that 9 out of 10
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countries
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use
nuclear
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power
.
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humanIn
conclusion, although nuclear
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is harmful for human and
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animals
,
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energy
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IELTS essay Nuclear power is used by most nations for work some say it is harmful but others against this view do advantage outweigh disadvantage

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
314 words
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