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Juvenile criminals should be punished to what extent do you agree or disagree

Juvenile criminals should be punished eKkEx

There are various factors which influence juvenile crime and adult crimes. It is often argued that people character has most important role in the family. Currently I agree that criminals should be punished as a result of adult criminals are punished. As far as, I am concerned that the family have a great role in developing a person's character. Now a days the Juvenile crimes are increased to more than adult crimes in India. To cite an example that a teenage boy who have an high pressure in her family and he were mentally irrased. As though he started crime in her early childhood. But in the crime Juvenile and adult should be want equal justice in our world. In addition, the surrounding has also an important role in developing a person's character. And adolscent in her childhood he or she doing crime as a result by their surrounding. To cite an example, in Tamil Nadu a teenager boy who kill her friend because he were added by drugs. Although, the aldocent punished that the adults are punished. To conclude that the government take much precautions to the adolescence. The government should be give seminars and other classes to the adolescent and make them a good persons.

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crime
 and adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
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 character has most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in the family. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Currently,
Currently
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 that criminals should be punished
as a result
 of adult criminals are punished
.

As far as, I am concerned
 that the family have a great role in developing a person's character. Did you mean "nowadays"?Nowadays
Now a days
 the Juvenile You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
are increased
 to more than adult You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crimes
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started
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crime
 in her early childhood. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
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crime
 Juvenile and adult should be want equal justice in our world.

In addition
, the surrounding has also
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important
 role in developing a person's character. And Possible spelling mistake found.adolescent
adolscent
 in her childhood he or Did you mean "she's doing", "she is doing", or "she was doing"?she's doingshe is doingshe was doing
she doing
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crime
as a result
 by their surrounding. To cite an example, in Tamil Nadu a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenileadolescent
teenager
 boy who kill her friend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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were
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 by drugs. “Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
, the Possible spelling mistake found.docent
aldocent
 punished that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpersonwomanman
adults
are punished
.

To conclude
 that the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 take Use "many" with countable nouns.many
much
 precautions to the adolescence. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 should be give seminars and other classes to the adolescent and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "person"?person
persons
. 