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TURKEY AND CLIMATE CHANGE

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In the nineteenth century, World has been changed forever by the industrial revolution, and after that, it spread over the world. Furthermore, as humanity, we have developed producing and consuming based economic model which is still using. Thus, it is a clear fact that the results include all countries across the world. Turkey is one of them especially concerning wildfires. Turkey is surrounded by forest, the number of %28 approximately. However, despite having vast fertile lands, unfortunately, Turkey has been losing numerous natural resources such as animal population, trees every passing day. To give an example, a great many forests have been a fire in Turkey related to climate change in the past years. There are too many factors regarding this situation one of the well-known fire planes that number's three, and this is insufficient. Secondly, the administration of wildfire has to be more determined in order to prevent fire. Otherwise, Turkey has been affected by climate change deeply. Accept it or not, climate change is getting closer, and we have to face it. In conclusion, Climate change is becoming a significant problem not only in the specific area but also far more ranges day by day. We accept it or not that problem has worried all of us.

In the nineteenth century, World has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 forever by the industrial revolution, and after that, it spread over the world. Furthermore
, as humanity, we have developed producing and consuming based economic model which is still
 using. Thus
, it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 fact that the results include all countries across the world. Turkey is one of them especially
 concerning wildfires.

Turkey is surrounded
 by forest, the number of %28 approximately. However
, despite having vast fertile lands, unfortunately, Turkey has been losing numerous natural resources such as animal population, trees every passing day. To give an example, a great This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 forests have been a fire in Turkey related to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 in the past years.

There are too This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
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planes
 that number's three, and this is insufficient. Secondly
, the administration of wildfire This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 be more determined in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 fire. Otherwise
, Turkey has been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
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climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
deeply
. Accept it or not, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is getting closer, and we This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 face it.

In conclusion
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtemperaturehumidity
Climate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentadvanceadjustmentdiversityshifttransition
change
 is becoming a significant problem not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 in the specific area This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 far more ranges day by day. We accept it or not that problem has worried all of us. 