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Junk food is like some people because junk food is very testi some people to eat junk food like than health because this is testei and masaledars

Junk food is like some people because junk food is very testi some people to eat junk food like than health because this is testei and masaledars lxLww
We should eat healthy food because it keeps to right for our bodys and it is gives energy there with our body is strond we should eat healthy food we don't easily ill we should eat for perfect health for example fruits vegetables dryfruit and milk food etc junk food do low energy but junk food is some benefit that it does to easily carry we can do ordered to junk food it arrives with easly our in the house it is very testi for eat
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to right for our
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and it is gives energy there with our body is
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we should
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eat
healthy
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food
we don't
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ill we should
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eat
for perfect health
for example
fruits vegetables
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dryfruit
and milk
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food
etc junk
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food
do low energy
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junk
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food
is
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some
benefit that it does to
easily
carry we can do ordered to junk
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food
it arrives with
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easly
our in the
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IELTS essay Junk food is like some people because junk food is very testi some people to eat junk food like than health because this is testei and masaledars

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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