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Junk food is bad for health do you agree or disagree?

Junk food is bad for health do you agree or disagree? aw9nX

In addition to this, people will be discouraged to purchase these items, and Instead they will spend money on healthy foods. This is because, they will be reluctant simply buying a burger with a high tax rather people will concentrate on buying a basket of fruits. To illustrate the example of Thailand, where the citizens are extremely cautious about buying foods from outside because of strict levy on packaged foods. If people can become habituated to hygienic food taking, the overall health of rating of will be greatly improved. This is only possible through imposing heavy tax on junk food.

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people
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foods
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foods
. If This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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food
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improved
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only
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