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To elaborate it, malls promote the use of cars, which leads to congestion on the roads and adds pollution. After that these stores have snatched away the livelihood of many small shopkeepers, who have been forced to shut down. For instance, one survey is conducted in Japan more than 40 thousands people face a health problem due to consumption of carbon emission. To conclude, despite a few disadvantages of supermarkets, the advantages are much more.

To elaborate it, malls promote the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of cars, which leads to congestion on the roads and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrues
adds
 pollution. After that these stores have snatched away the livelihood of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 shopkeepers, who have been forced
 to shut down. For instance
, one survey is conducted
 in Japan more than 40 thousands This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 face a health problem due to consumption of carbon emission. To conclude
, despite a few disadvantages of supermarkets, the advantages are much more. 