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John, I’m very sad to know that you were ill for a long time. In this morning, I have just received scholarship that you donated. Not only am I very grateful for it but also I am very moved

John, I’m very sad to know that you were ill for a long time. In this morning, I have just received scholarship that you donated. Not only am I very grateful for it but also I am very moved xaDn9
Binh Loc, Dien Khanh, Khanh Hoa, Viet Nam October, 2nd, 2021 Dear John, I’m very sad to know that you were ill for a long time. In this morning, I have just received scholarship that you donated. Not only am I very grateful for it but also I am very moved. Because this scholarship is the best meaningful gift that I have ever received. I hope soon you will ẹnoy good health to what you want to do. Best wishes, Tuyen
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October, 2nd, 2021

Dear John,

I’m
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sad to know that you were ill for a long time. In this morning, I have
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received scholarship that you donated. Not
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grateful for it
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this scholarship is the best meaningful gift that I have ever received. I hope
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ẹnoy
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health to what you want to do.

Best wishes,

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Tuyen

IELTS essay John, I’m very sad to know that you were ill for a long time. In this morning, I have just received scholarship that you donated. Not only am I very grateful for it but also I am very moved

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80 words
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