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Jennie Tinker and the new world

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Jennie came from a long ancestory of the witches wicked world. After the tragic death of her mother and her little brother, she took herself far away from Sunrise Valley to clear her mind and to practice normal human behavior. She is still a little wicked on the inside, but she is trying her best to not only adapt to a new world, but to win the heart of Austin Taylor whom she met after moving to Pleasantview. Will Austin accept her love despite knowing who's Jennie really is on the inside?
Jennie came from a long
ancestory
of the witches wicked world. After the tragic death of her mother and her
little
brother, she took herself far away from Sunrise Valley to
clear
her mind and to practice normal human behavior. She is
still
a
little
wicked on the inside,
but
she is trying her best to not
only
adapt to a new world,
but
to win the heart of Austin Taylor whom she met after moving to
Pleasantview
. Will Austin accept her
love
despite knowing
who's
Jennie
really
is on the inside?
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IELTS essay Jennie Tinker and the new world

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
92 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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